It was a short walk to the Great Hall, though Aidan managed to make it take twice as long. Stepping through the tall oaken doors into the Great Hall proper, he paused a moment before moving to his seat at the bench. The other Bishops were already there, quite surprisingly; it usually took them longer to gather. Taking his seat at the end of the long table, Aidan turned his eyes to the man standing before them.
Dressed in rough wool, this was no seasoned courier. Most likely he was just the man with the quickest horse in his village. His dark brown almost black hair, that was still dripping water, marked him as a northerner. He stood on his toes, almost bouncing; eager no doubt to tell his tale.
"Now that we are all here, we may begin," a gravelly voice intoned from Aidan's left. A quick glance showed Bishop Gregory giving a stern look his direction. Bishop Gregory then gestured sharply to a deacon seated next to the table.
Nervously, this was likely the boys first time mediating, he stood up and began his duties. "Your name is Marcus Jansen of Glenstow, correct?"
The messenger jumped slightly, jerking his head toward the deacon; likely lost in what he planned to say. "Yes," he said stumbling over the words, "Tha-That is correct."
Losing himself in reciting his memorized lines the deacon continued, "Please state for the council the nature of your message."
The messenger blinked, shifting his weight slightly, then took a deep breath, his carefully prepared words lost now that the moment had come. "Your Excellencies, I come before you with the utmost urgency. Glenstow is being visited by the Angel of Death."
Tour de famille (and a stop in Banff and BC)
2 weeks ago
I promised it wouldn't be another 2 and a half years for the next update and here it is!
ReplyDeleteI'm not quite as happy with this one as the others.(I'm still not very good at dialogue) Best way to get better is to practice though right? ^_^
Nicely done. Each episode ending with a cliff-hanger. Your comment reminds me of something I once heard. What does a writer do? A writer writes.
ReplyDeleteCurses to you Andrew!!! You've left me on a cliff hanger again!! Thank goodness it hasn't been 2 yrs. already.
ReplyDeleteWay to go, Andrew! This is excellent writing! One recommendation: gravely to gravelly. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks! Words that are one letter off like that and both are words can be quite tricksy sometimes!
DeleteAgreed. English has a ton of words like that. :P
DeleteToo short! I was so disappointed...that's all? More! More!
ReplyDeleteNo pressure Andrew, but you have heard from the masses. We all want more. We are greedy. Haha
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