30.3.14

What Remains of the Henge

Deep in the heart of the treacherous remains of what was once Britain lies a mass of mountain islands. Jutting up from the sea, the sharp cliffs seem to try to pierce the sky. Wind howls through the crevices and along the cliff faces. Along with the wind comes terrible sounds. Shrieks, horrible agonizing shrieks. It is as if the sea itself is crying out in agony, waiting to die and be put out of it's misery.

Should a foolish soul, thinking they are being brave, venture further inwards they are met with many challenges. There are men, or what is left of men, seemingly rotting in the ocean. They warn the traveler to turn back. Should he not heed their warning, they strike. They are fearsome warriors indeed, surprisingly resilient and vicious for their rotten appearance.

If he can make it past the rotted ones he begins to see ribbons of light in the air, streaming across the sky in the same direction as him. Pulled, as if by some unseen force, that perhaps pulls the unwary traveler as well. The shrieks get louder as he progresses forward. Shadows streak across the sky. Those few who have made it this far and returned have lost their minds.

Only fragments of what exists beyond the reaches can be obtained from these damaged souls. It is hard to say if any of it is even real or if it is a part of their psychosis. They speak of spirits, faces contorted in pain. Giant birds fly through the air, doing battle with each other. The lights in the sky grow brighter. A mountain rises up before them. Light emanates from the peak, brighter than the sun. Cliffs on every side, nearly impassable.


One man has reached the peak and returned. They call him Old Man Marbles, and believe me, he's lost all of them. He rarely speaks, and when he does, it is usually only after he's nearly ready to collapse from the alcohol. Hushed tones and cryptic phrases are all he uses. Bright stones... Pillars of sky... Ritual... Man but not man... Death...

6 comments:

  1. This isn't part of the Curse of Glenstow series, although don't worry, I haven't completely forgotten about that. I just have many other stories spinning around in my head. This particular bit, is a tiny piece of an incredibly large story I have planned.

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  2. But you left us hanging as usual wanting to know more. Well done Ash!!

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  3. Very descriptive. Now what is Old Man Marbles going to do?

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  4. Old Man Marbles? Eh, sadly he's probably going to drink himself to death. The days when he was the hero are behind him.

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  5. Wow, it is gruesome, but you really made me see it. Well done, that is quite impressive. And, I also really like the way you introduce it, as if from the perspective of those in the surrounding lands, keeping the place itself a mystery.

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  6. Great to read what you have written, as always. More, please...

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